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My Thinking.

believe that one of the biggest impacts for growth is not only by experiencing challenges ourselves, but by also seeing the other people around us take the same challenges, and overcome them in a different way. It shows us different techniques and styles that can give us new ideas that we may have never thought of on our own.

 

In the beginning of the semester, I felt that I had a strong understanding of writing and the elements that take part in it. I saw myself as an advocate of understanding for various types of literacies and genres. However, over the course of the past few months, I have learned that there is much more about writing that there is to learn. I feel that this class has given me insight to what can still be learned and understood to help me become a better writer and to better understand literacies that I come into contact with.

 

By being able to see other people’s writings- from famous writers to even my peers- I was able to see the same idea in different angles and perspectives. Each person was able to take the same simple thought, and expand it to different viewpoints. When responding to a prompt or idea, we usually only see the prompt in the way we perceived it. However, by seeing other writings, my understanding of critical thinking and thought process broadened.

 

Peer editing showed me new ways to express myself. My peers were able to show me where I was both strong in my writing and in what areas I needed improvement. By listening to different suggestions and reading how they expressed themselves in their writing, I was able to take out different techniques that could help me later on in my writings. They say that a picture is worth a thousand words. However, I think that if the picture were past around it would be worth an infinite amount, because with each new person that views a piece, comes a new idea.

 

Something that I struggled with was writing and expanding about my opinion. Many of our writings this semester were based off of how we felt about a certain topic. We had to connect ourselves with other writings and tell what emotions and thoughts we pulled from the piece. Prior to this semester, many of my writings were based off of fact and information. They lacked any sort of emotion or personal opinion from the writer.

 

In the beginning of the semester, I felt that I had a strong understanding of writing and the elements that take part in it. I saw myself as an advocate of understanding for various types of literacies and genres. However, over the course of the past few months, I have learned that there is much more about writing that there is to learn. I feel that this class has given me insight to what can still be learned and understood to help me become a better writer and to better understand different forms of writing that I come into contact with.

 

By expanding our understanding of different styles and tools of writing, we can better express ourselves and construct our thoughts in a way that fully delivers our emotions, thoughts, and ideas.

Being made into a sex object is not the only problem female artists are facing.

 

Credit is not being given where it should. For many female successful female artists, the media did not focus on her achievements, but rather, how the man supporting her made it all happen. Lady Gaga’s ex-boyfriend, Fusari, claims that it was he “came up with the moniker “Lady Gaga,”” (Idolater) and therefore, her whole persona. Similar situations have happened with Adele and her manager Jonathan Dickens and Beyonce with Jay-Z.

 

Early April of 2013, “ indie darling” Solange Knowles tweeted: “I find it very disappointing when I am presented as the “face” of my music, or a “vocal muse” when I write or co-write every fucking song, How can one be a “vocal muse” to their own melodies, storytelling, and words they wrote?” (fact mag).

 

 

Yea, She's Good For a Girl

“Although Beyoncé, Lady Gaga, and Madonna are essential ingredients of our modern culture, women musicians have had a very difficult time breaking through and getting the credit they deserve.” -Abbey Phillips

Claire Boucher took to her tumblr to post “I’m tired of men who aren’t professional or even accomplished musicians continually offering to ‘help me out’ (without being asked), as if i did this by accident and i’m gonna flounder without them. or as if the fact that I’m a woman makes me incapable of using technology. I have never seen this kind of thing happen to any of my male peers,” she writes. “I’m tired of the weird insistence that i need a band or i need to work with outside producers (and I’m eternally grateful to the people who don’t do this).” (fact mag) "I don't want to be molested at shows or on the street by people who perceive me as an object that exists for their personal satisfaction, I'm sad that my desire to be treated as an equal and as a human being is interpreted as hatred of men, rather than a request to be included and respected." (huffington)

 

Both Knowles and Boucher were said to have not even written their own songs by the media. Female artists are not getting their due.

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